Tuesday, 24 January 2012

Names

The production company will be called 'SteamTrain' because of the steampunk elements within the film and also it reflects the more industrial post-apocalyptic future we wish to portray in our opening.
'Us and Them' will be the title because of the main conflict between two separate forces against each other and it also adds a sense of enigma.
'Abandon Ship Distribution' will be the distribution company, as it reflects the urgency and suspense that will be in our film opening and also again has the connotation with industrialism and machinery.

Ideas feedback


Used a website called 'Omegle.com' (a site which allows you to talk to a random person on the internet, which is an advantage as it make the study completely biased as we have no previous connection to the person we were talking to) to pitch our idea for our film opening. Explained the main concept and asked if there was any improvements that could be done. The person asked said they were 16 so they fit into our target audience.

Discussion

We discussed that we need to interview people to determine who the most appropriate target audience would be and  what viewers would expect and want from our film opening based on the ideas we already have.

Updated shooting script

Shot Number
Description and Duration
Sound/Dialogue
1
Establishing shot of the outside of the Factory. Long shot.
A monologue narrated by Elliot explaining the backstory of what happened to him.
(Cut)
2
Establishing shot of a pan around the inside of the factory. Showing the main characters on the inside working at a table.
The monologue continues to explain the situation.
(Cut)
3
Establishing shot of the soldiers approaching from a distance. Long shot following
The monologue continues to explain.
(Cut)
4
Mid shot of the soldiers approaching.
The monologue continues

(Cut)
5
Reaction shots of the people inside of the factory because of the soldiers approaching.
The monologue continues
Pause so the characters inside the factory can react.
(Cut)
3
Shot of soldiers running toward the camera. Soldiers are wearing black gas/surgical type masks. Soldiers wearing heavy black clothing carrying guns of some kind. 3 seconds  

Diegetic sound of feet running on pavement.
Non-diegetic soundtrack continues.

(Cut)
4
Long shot of the main door as the soldiers move toward the door. One of the either sides of the door and the third kicks through the door.

Monologue continues until the door is kicked through.

(Cut)  
5
Long shot of the door from the inside of the factory. The door kicks through and the soldiers move in and through.
Monologue stops
Diegetic sound of the door being kicked open.
(Cut)
5
Mid shot of the soldiers moving through the factory. The camera is low down and has a slightly low angle shot.
Diegetic sound of footsteps and organised orders
Non-Diegetic  suspense music

(Cut)
6
Over the shoulder shot of the soldier looking over the soldier checking the over an object.
Diegetic sound of footsteps
Non-Diegetic suspense music.

(Cut)
7
POV shot from behind one something of the soldiers coming together.
Diegetic breathing of the person.
(Cut)
8
Mid shot of the soldiers as they meet in the middle.
Dialogue of the soldiers.
(Cut)
9
Close up of an object rolling out from nowhere.
Diegetic sound of the object rolling.
(Cut)
10
Over the shoulder shot of the soldier aiming his gun at the object as it rolls.
Diegetic sound
(Cut)
11
Long shot of the two people jumping out from behind a box.
Non-Diegetic sound

(cut)
12
Long shot of the soldiers running away from the factory.
Monologue starts near the end of the shot.
(Fade into a flash back)
13
POV shot from ‘Leaf’s’ perspective. Surgeons looking down onto the camera. Surgeons wearing masks and white coats with scalpels. Blurred.
Monologue talks over.


(Fade to black)
14
Track across the surgery room looking at ‘leaf’ strapped to the table. The surgeons have their backs to the camera leaning over into her.
Monologue continues over.

(Fade to black)
15
Black screen
Loud diegetic sound of commotion and loud sirens.
(Fade in)
16
The two people running away from surgeons and soldiers chasing them .
Diegetic sound of gunshots and shouts.


The shooting script describes each camera angle and the dialogue used in the opening. This had to be changed because the original shooting script didn't work with new location.

Set

On Wednesday 25th we will empty the set (a warehouse) and decorate it to fit the theme of the film. To portray the 'post-apocalyptic/futuristic' themes we will use old wires and dilapidated machinery scattered in seemingly random places, and try to create the effect that the warehouse is abandoned and derelict. We will then begin filming at the end of Wednesday.