Synopsis Of New Film Opening

The film opening is split into two narratives; the first focusing on an as-yet-unknown character sitting  in an abandoned underpass, typing on a laptop. As the scene progresses it becomes apparent that some unseen person is watching his every move. The scene cuts as the main character runs away; leaving behind his laptop in the process.

This then cuts directly to the second character's narrative: a young girl who is tied to a chair and gagged for unknown reasons. A shadowy figure than approaches her and it is strongly implied that he tortures her. Whilst his back is turned, the second character unties herself, grabs a weapon and stabs him before freeing herself and running out of shot, where it cuts the title of the film.

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Opening Credits

Credit order
'SteamTrain productions' logo (fade in/out)
Abandonship distribution' logo (fade in/out)
First actor 'Sam Broadway' (fade in/out, over video)
Second Actor 'Poppy May' (fade in/out, over video)
Title (fade in/out, over video)
Minor actors (fade in/out, over video)
Sound credit (fade in/out, over video)
Director of Cinematography (fade in/out, over video)
Director of Sound (fade in/out, over video)
Chief Editor (fade in/out, over video)

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